July 25th, 2009

eliphas, napping

Stupid time, running in only one direction

I have been working on The Monster of a Story and found that I have a bunch of scenes at night, followed by a scene at sunrise, followed by one at breakfast time, followed by one in the morning -- so far, so good -- followed by three scenes at the break of dawn with different characters. It does not break logic, and it develops drama the way I want to, but I fear that the sun bouncing up and down in the sky will not leave the best impression on reading.

Have to shift scenes. Or have a few people sleep in. Shouldn't be that hard, but for some reason it is.

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    June Tabor and the Oyster Band: Dives and Lazarus
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